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This one was drawn right after the mage drawing, at about 3 AM. lol. My body is begging for sleep ^_^. Anyways, while I was drawing it, I had a whole lot of trouble on drawing the girl's left arm and hand holding the headphone... At the end, it turned out with her looking like she's got this really deformed hand. also, I get second thoughts on the placement of the... whattya call that? those lines that the music notes are placed on... yeah, that thing, it looks like it's growing out of her head or something... Ahh well, I think it came out not too bad, overall, just stupid mistakes here and there. I really gotta get around to drawing on normal hours and sleeping on normal hours. too bad I can't seem to find time to schedule drawing when the sun is up, lol. Anyways, as usual, comments please, critiques even better, just list what's wrong and give an explanation of why it's wrong and how it should be fixed, thank you. And good morning, all, Imma go to sleep!
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Hey, hi! ... I have something about the guy ... His knees ... they seem too close to his feet. They should've probably been drawn a little above the girl's knee. Oh and ... the girl's left hand ... I have trouble with hands a lot too and what I've learned to do that helped me improve much in that area is that I draw an upside-down triangle where the lines are curved in a bit. Do you get what I mean by that ... ? I don't know how to explain it ... 
... It looks like a puffy triangle! ... Haha, I sound retarded ... anyhow ...
It helps with how long the hand should be and where to start the fingers. Like the line where your finger meets your hand should be a little bit, just a tiny bit pass the base of the triangle ... Yah and that's it. Do you get it? o_o I'm kind of stupid when it comes to explaining things with words ... Sooo ... I drew a picture in example, cuz I want to help you! *nods* Hands and Triangles!
I'm sorry if that was too much talking ... what with the piccie and all ... *wah don't hit me*
Anyhow, it's a pretty good picture. Just keep at it and you'll get better and better and better ... and then you'll be the bestest better ever! Yah.
... It looks like a puffy triangle! ... Haha, I sound retarded ... anyhow ...It helps with how long the hand should be and where to start the fingers. Like the line where your finger meets your hand should be a little bit, just a tiny bit pass the base of the triangle ... Yah and that's it. Do you get it? o_o I'm kind of stupid when it comes to explaining things with words ... Sooo ... I drew a picture in example, cuz I want to help you! *nods* Hands and Triangles!
I'm sorry if that was too much talking ... what with the piccie and all ... *wah don't hit me*
Anyhow, it's a pretty good picture. Just keep at it and you'll get better and better and better ... and then you'll be the bestest better ever! Yah.