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is a title really required??

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for those people who don't bother to take me off the devwatch list, or those who are just too lazy too... Thank you! as things are going it doesnt seem as if I really deserve anyone to have me on watch. anyway, this time around I drew some happy looking girl doing something... like... running and greeting someone or something...? (Im feeling pretty tired right now, so it's hard for me to get an idea for the title or explain what she's doing... I didn't really have anything in mind, it was more like, "Hmm, ok, lets put in some movement here, a hand motion there, make her look like shes running or something..." anyway, if anyone comes up with a good title, feel free to tell me. Oh yeah, if ever I hope to get any better on my drawing works, I NEED to be critiqued... Be as harsh as you want to be. It might break me, but it'll always rebuild me a little bit stronger afterwords. thanks.
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Hey man. I don't know why i never saw this in my watch list... thing-ma-bobber... anyways, here is a fe wpointers to fix if you ever will.

1. The feet is our of poportion and perspective is wrong
2. The girl's left hand seems too small compared to teh right hand vice-versa
3. The leg poportion is wired. and the poistion of it seems un natural.


the facial expression is great and i'd say the titel should be Yay or something liek that lol

hope you fix these flaws >.> it be a good pice