Chain Whip

Ok, I KNOW you'll find mistakes in this one. Why? because I worked out the day before, and my arms are aching like hell. And because I just got back to my friends house after a 4 hour long drive from San Fransisco's Nobuo Uematsu's concert, back to the Valley (Outskirts of LA) and it's 5 in the morning, and when I started drawing this. I just decided to put this up because I think it came out looking at least half decent. I know the chain look all off and stuff, like it get's all crooked here, and stiff and straight there, but that was the first time I attempted to draw a chain in motion. It get's really annoying after the 8th link... Anyways, gomments and critiques are appreciated as always! By the way, I KNOW her left hand looks weird... anyone know how it should've been done to make it look right? I erased and redrew that hand about 7 times over, lost my patience, and decided "AWWW (****) IT!"

PS: To those who are amazing with photoshop: See the dirty white space in the picture? that's where my hand smudged over the pencil lead while I was drawing... how do I effectively clean that up and make the picture look nice for photoshop coloring?